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Many thanks for your perceptive and articulate editorial letter . . . . Excellent suggestions.

Jeffery Deaver

Ninth & Nowhere (Thomas & Mercer, 2019)

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Wow. . . . Amazing work. . . . [You] helped me turn the manuscript into a real book.

Manu Saadia

Trekonomics (Pipertext, 2016)

⭑⭑⭑⭑☆⯨⯨⯨⯨ (⯨186)

I express a specific thank-you to Matthew Patin. . . You made this a stronger narrative. . . . Matt is there from beginning to end, is patient, and most of all helps make [the book] better. The two-way nature of the process, phone calls, and discussions—it made me a better writer.

Gregory C. Randall

Venice Black (Thomas & Mercer, 2018)

⭑⭑⭑⭑☆ (1,305)

[Writing] a novel is like shooting a spaceship to the moon. There are so many things that can go wrong, and working with Matt gave me peace of mind. He was mission control. I trusted him, and he helped guide my story where it needed to be. . . . Matt [can] take your novel to the next level.

J. D. Trafford

Good Intentions (Thomas & Mercer, 2018)

⭑⭑⭑⭑☆ (964)

We were brand new to book publishing and heard you were the right guy to go to for advice. Your detailed suggestions about our book’s message, structure, and visual design were eye-opening and helped us sell the book to Harvard Business Review Press. Thank you!"

Evan Baehr & Evan Loomis

Get Backed (Harvard Business Review Press, 2015)

⭑⭑⭑⭑☆ (282)

Your edits are wonderful! I very much respect your talent and expertise. . . . A truly brilliant editor and I am deeply grateful. . . . My manuscript is way, way better as a result of your fine work.

Anna Carroll, MSSW

The Feedback Imperative (River Grove Books, 2014)

⭑⭑⭑⭑☆ (60)

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 Mindfulness of the gaps between message and understanding, suspense and payoff, clarity and confusion, cause and effect, means and ends, a character's attitudes and motivations and their ultimate decisions and behaviors—the things that make stories whole, characters dynamic, arguments sound, and readers engaged

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Helping creators bring their work to life, engage new audiences, and advance their careers has been my mission for nearly twenty years.

No matter where you are in your creative journey or, if you're an author, in your manuscript—just getting started? somewhere in the vast middle? first draft complete? preparing a submission?—you're likely eager to take your work to another level and further realize your vision. 

I relish those in-between spaces—so much room for possibility, imagination, and refinement, and, soon, so much closer to audience's hands, too. Together, let's discover how my approach can help your ideas and vision match the words on the page.

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